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March 19, 2013 at 1:09 pm #2950
Barracuda
ParticipantAs mentioned in my thread over in the Pub, my sister asked me to do some photos of her and her fiance for their save the date cards. I’m far from a seasoned portrait photographer, and after expressing this clearly, she still wanted me to give it a go. Here’s a couple of their favorites that I processed for them last night.
Feedback on processing extremely welcome btw!
Top pick, color:

Top pick, B&W (high key)

2nd pick, color (still may try to edit out that gray pipe over his shoulder):

2nd pick, B&W (high key)

3rd pick
March 19, 2013 at 2:03 pm #50964Yugoboy
ParticipantAll are nice, but given how forced the smile looks in Pick #1, I’d go with #2 (especially if you ‘shop out the pipe). #3’s got its charms as well.
I’d say you did well… very well.
March 19, 2013 at 2:22 pm #50965ravnostic
Participant3, 2 (agree on the pipe, and that smile in one rules it out. Completely.) Congrats on first efforts!!
March 19, 2013 at 2:34 pm #50966ravnostic
ParticipantMore I look, more I like 3. The DOF from waist to face is perfect, the bokeh flowers enhance, against a further background that doesn’t destract. If I were the subjects, I’d be really happy with that one.
March 19, 2013 at 5:53 pm #50967Barracuda
ParticipantAgree on the smile, it was quite difficult to get a smile out of that wasn’t either forced or otherwise less than natural looking. That first photo was quite nearly the first photo taken that day, so it’s not like he was tired of smiling already. lol.
March 20, 2013 at 1:08 am #50968
orionidParticipantI like three, I agree with the sentiments about the smile in number one. And, ummm…. Since these aren’t farktography, I’d probably like number two if you whitened his teeth just a tad.
March 20, 2013 at 1:24 am #50969fluffybunny
ParticipantIMHO best are 3 and 5.
Also, jawline courtesy Peter Hurley:
March 20, 2013 at 4:22 am #50970Barracuda
Participantthe sad thing is, I did whiten the teeth some already… recent ex-smoker.
March 20, 2013 at 6:36 am #50971fluffybunny
Participantrecent ex-smoker
Good for him.
March 20, 2013 at 12:41 pm #50972Barracuda
Participantrecent ex-smoker
Good for him.
Agreed. Though I think the victory goes to my sister. 😆
Two more that I got processed yesterday:

March 20, 2013 at 3:23 pm #50973ravnostic
ParticipantThat first one of the 2nd batch is a real keeper.
March 20, 2013 at 6:56 pm #50974fluffybunny
ParticipantDefinitely like the last two over previous set. The flowers seem to bring out some warmer skin tones (or your processing, not sure). Better expressions, better framing.
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